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Drafting
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Fred Junior raced down the dusty path covered in dry leaves, reaching the gigantic, lush, green patch of grass infront of the water. The reflection of the beautiful sunset revealed itself in the still water. He stared at it in awe, dreaming about the cool refreshing swim that was calling him to dive in and join in the fun. He thought for a moment, wondering whether or not he should jump into the water now or admire it from a rock surrounded by beautiful daisies and colourful tulips. Before he could decide, he heard a sound that made him jump so very high it made him feel even more scared. He ran behind the lush healthy bushes that flourished around the lake. The frightning echo he heared appered to be a missly little cricket. He then slowly creped up to the water and decided to dive in as though he was an the best and most incredable diver in the world.
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Meetings
| Who |
When I can meet |
| Mira |
M-F, 8am-5pm |
| Liz |
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| Carissa |
Saturday, 5pm |
| Catherine R |
Sunday, 4pm-8pm |
Drafts
Commenting
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"he bolted in a panic".......can become......"nostrils flaring, hackles spiked, teeth bared, eyes starting...."
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He snapped his long tail angrily.........can become..............."raising his muzzle and bearing his teeth, he snapped his long tail.."
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