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Page history last edited by PBworks 13 years, 8 months ago

Group Project

 


 

Working together using this wiki

 

 

Think of this wiki as a shared online whiteboard. Your entire group can share information using this wiki, making your research accessible to everyone. Play around with this wiki: Notice how you can add comments to a page, see what people have changed, and edit all the text.

 

Group members

 

 

 

Sources

 

  1. Source 1
  2. Source 2
  3. Source 3
  4. Source 4

 

Drafting

 

      Utter silence grew in the dark and empty forest. Not a single soul stirred in the nest, and Rufus could feel the eerie silence hanging in the air. His soft brown fur stood on end suddenly as he detected sounds from another animal creeping slowly around outside of his nest. His mother had gone to get their dinner and she clearly gave him stirct instructions to stay inside the nest at all times. The minute he heard footsteps slowly creep closer and closer he was shaking with fear. Should he flee and disobey his mother? Or await the unknown creature, but take the risk of a deadly creature that was prowling outside. He had the drive to survive, and in the blink of an eye, decided to run as fast as he could from the nest to a safer spot;anywhere. Not knowing what was behind him, he scurried as fast as he could and not even looking back. When his lungs were screaming for air, he slowed down and shakily turned his head hoping not to see anything un-wanted. Luckily, all he saw was tall grass behind him and afew trees surrounding in every direction. He had no idea where the nest was, and slowly accepted that he was lost. Rufus sits there, in the middle of the night trying to grasp everything that happened at once. But just as he thought everything would be okay, he suddenly hears a terrifying shreek coming from the direction of where he thought he came from. Rufus jumps up to his feet worried and wondering who or what made that noise. So cautiously, he walks towards the sounds. As he gets close enough to see what is going on, Rufus notices a body alone laying motionless on the cold and moist forest ground.
 
 

 

Meetings

 

 

When should we meet?

Who When I can meet
Carm  
Ashley  
   
   

 

Drafts

 

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Commenting

 

Stories show something happening, they don't tell about it.

 

Some suggestions for your comments:

 

"he bolted in a panic".......can become......"nostrils flaring, hackles spiked, teeth bared, eyes starting...."

 

"he felt nervous".........can become.............."his heart thumped like a hammer...he felt jumpy and twisted up inside....a thousand drummers were pounding away on his head..."

 

He snapped his long tail angrily.........can become..............."raising his muzzle and bearing his teeth, he snapped his long tail.."

 

 

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