Group Project
Working together using this wiki
Think of this wiki as a shared online whiteboard. Your entire group can share information using this wiki, making your research accessible to everyone. Play around with this wiki: Notice how you can add comments to a page, see what people have changed, and edit all the text.
Group members
- Jesse (AIM:
Jesse89235)
- Chris (email me)
- Dana
- Pat
Sources
- Source 1
- Source 2
- Source 3
- Source 4
Drafting
Meetings
When should we meet?
| Who | When I can meet |
| Jesse | M-F, 8am-5pm |
| Chris | Anytime after 2pm |
| Dana | Saturday, 5pm |
| Pat | Sunday, 4pm-8pm |
Drafts
To track changes, use the Page History link at the bottom. You can choose to accept or delete changes that are made to your part of the story. Or,
use the Comment link at the top to suggest that the writer make revisions.
Commenting
Stories show something happening, they don't tell about it.
Some suggestions for your comments:
"he bolted in a panic".......can become......"nostrils flaring, hackles spiked, teeth bared, eyes starting...."
"he felt nervous".........can become.............."his heart thumped like a hammer...he felt jumpy and twisted up inside....a thousand drummers were pounding away on his head..."
He snapped his long tail angrily.........can become..............."raising his muzzle and bearing his teeth, he snapped his long tail.."